a parked car at midnight
a parked car at midnightat an abandoned shopping center that she calls outer spaceasleep with her head on the wheel dried blue tear mascara lines down her face inner gargoyles maniacal paint she is...
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but these lines seem really out of placeas far as tone of the poem goes,and the sounds of the words:she could not see the gargantuan moon of her progress because her tiny star of regression nice...
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You start on a real good roll here, my attention certainluy is caught by the title and kept through stanza 1. But somewhere during stanza 2, you seem to lose the rhythm a bit, and although you catch...
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